literature

hate the phonies

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Literature Text

Flawless is lawless,
because all that's left are cover-ups and lies.
All trimmed down and all fixed up,
each thing is fake, on every single side.

Extraordinary is ordinary,
because that's what everyone is in the end.
Fame is just having people love an image,
and having no one left who's a real friend.

Perfect is imperfect,
because now there's everything to hate.
Remember, 'it's what's inside that counts'?
Now people are hollow and their shells are bait.
maybe a little too short?
I'm not sure if the section about being extraordinary and fame really coincide with each other...
the same with lawless and flawless.. they rhyme but not sure how lawless works with it...
hmm...
any ideas?

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storyofmylife054's avatar
Hmm not perfect but I kind of like that. :)
Reminded me of Holden Caulfield and The Catcher in the Rye.